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Last Updated: Aug 21, 2008 - 3:13:23 PM




Watchmen Objections - Storytelling and the Storyboard
By Hervé St-Louis
Jul 18, 2008 - 8:01:28 AM

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After reading about director Zack Snyder’s direction for The Watchmen movie, I have a few conscious objections, even if the trailer released earlier was just mind grabbing.

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How closely Snyder will stick to the original comic book material.  Snyder, just like Sin City Director, Robert Rodriguez has a tendency to stay too close to the comic book and use it as the storyboards for his movie plots. While using as much of the source comic book material is commendable, the comic book is not a movie.

Although both comic books and storyboards are forms of sequential art, they do not try to achieve the same. The comic book does away with the concept of image transition through time and favours spatial changes in each panels. In the storyboard, the spatial qualities are not as important because the main objective of the storyboard is to serve as the basis of a film, a medium that change through time and not through space.

Many directors don’t understand that and in using a comic book as the storyboard of a film, with little nuances and changes, they make the film subservient to the comic book while negating the very storytelling nature that makes the comic book a unique medium for narrative storytelling.

If The Watchmen film is but an animated copy and paste of the original comic book, then it will not work ultimately as a movie, a piece of art that should stand on its own. In essence this is Moore’s major complaint about adapting his work into film. The comic book is its own thing, and film is its own thing. This obsession with trying to bridge them does nothing to reinforce any of the two media as the main compelling reason to do so is monetary gain and not a respect for art.

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The film adaptations of 300 and Sin City both used almost the exact shot by shot sequences from the comic books. While some comic book readers might see this as respecting the source material, comic books don’t have the same rules when showing specific shots. First, comic books are not limited by format. A single panel can be any size. Second. Because of spatial placement of a comic book panel inside a wider page, one panel containing some information can reinforce the information provided by a neighbouring panel. These options don’t exist in film, where the only image one see, is the one playing.

Frank Miller, just like Gibbons and Moore, used storytelling and innovative shot by shot structures to enhance the narrative they were offering. For example, by relying almost exclusively on a nine panel grid for The Watchmen, Gibbons used closure and some repetitions to tell the story. Standard film techniques, like action and reaction shots were not as necessary.  But in film without consistent action reaction shots, viewers can easily lose track of what is happening.

Some comic book readers confuse storytelling with style. They will argue that the black and white feel of Sin City or the painted effects of 300 are necessary to capture the essence of the comic book in film format, and that’s why the adaptations must stay as closely related to the source material. The problem with this argument is that the actual style, the rendering of a comic book, has little to do with storytelling. Storytelling is not about crosshatching, black and white effects, or colouring.

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Storytelling is about how the basic visual elements tell the story. An effective storyteller in a comic book could be drawing with stick figures, and be the best storyteller, ever. What matters is the composition and how each visual element relates to one another within a panel, and in the overall page composition.  For example, Gibbons’ visual style is quite sober and not as stylized as Frank Miller’s. But it takes nothing away from his storytelling abilities. Some other great comic book artists who get storytelling are Keith Giffen and the late Mike Parobeck.

I seriously doubt that Snyder will successfully pull this off, understanding what The Watchmen did as comic book and what it could do as a movie. Can he successfully use film's vernacular language to elevate The Watchmen's narrative to the same level as the comic book, or will he simply rely on the plot and copying the exact shot by shot sequence from the source material. I am not against the adaption of The Watchmen into film. From what I’ve seen, it will probably be a superb film and probably better than most super hero films. However, it will do a disservice to comic books as it only borrows superficially from The Watchmen comic book.

Erratum

In the previous version of this article, wrote that Rorschach's mask did not morph. It seems that the mask of the character Rorschach did indeed change in the comic book and this is not an addition of the film adaptation's team. So I can't used that as an objection to the new Watchmen film.


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Sorry... the mask was heat sensitive..
Rorschach's mask was made from a dress made from a polymer sandwich with chemicals in between that would changed the pattern as body temperature changed. He cut it into a mask using hot shears and it changes constantly as a result of his temperature. Now Gibbon may have used that explanation to create wonderful graphic moments, but the mask does change constantly. It's all in the book. If I had time I'd tell you where, but it's where he explains how he got the mask. The idea that everyone sees what they want to see is nice, but it's not actually true, except as much as it was true in actual Rorschach tests.

Cheers!
#1 - Stuffdaddy - 07/18/2008 - 12:55
Moving mask
Yes, it's in the book, as i recall, the fabric was made specifically for a woman or something, it had the morphing patterns and he got it from the factory, i think the factory shut down or something, hence there is no more of that fabric around. correct me if i'm wrong.
#2 - salman - 07/18/2008 - 13:06
Haven't read or opened the book in over a decade. Will have to check that. Thanks for pointing that out.
#3 - Hervé St-Louis - 07/18/2008 - 13:07
funny
It's funny when people object to issues that aren't really there i.e. moving mask. I agree as much effort should be put into making this a great move as is put into staying faithful to the comic
#4 - Austin Haygood - 07/18/2008 - 14:49
you didn't bother glancing through the book again before writing this?
you haven't read or opened the book in over 10 years and you didn't bother doing so before writing this? i'll admit i haven't read it all the way through in a while, but i do remember the mask constantly changing. Kovacs made the mask from the same material that Kitty Genovese was wearing. Genovese was a real life rape/murder victim in New York City in the 70s, and is used as an example of "learned helplessness" in the way many onlookers witnessed and didn't do anything about her brutal rape/murder.
#5 - Howard - 07/18/2008 - 16:04
You haven't opened the book in a decade, but you've posted an article about Rorschach's "non-moving" mask. Blech. Stop wasting our time and attention.
#6 - BobbyShibbs - 07/18/2008 - 16:28
der
The morphing mask is explained in the book.

Most directors DON'T follow the actual comic book, Sin City was an exception to that. 300 was pretty close in that it sought to replicated some of Frank Miller's fantastic visuals, but it wasn't "subservient" to the comic either.

Frank Miller's is also an exception, with a visual style that needs to be replicated to effectively portray it in film. IF you want to make a superman movie, you've got about 2000 stories by 500 different artists (give or take), so there's no definite "look" to replicate other than the basics... whole other story...

Zach Snyder has 2 major motion pictures... ONE of them is from a comic book, so I don't know how you've determined that he "endency to stay too close to the comic book" if you only have one example to draw from. IF you saw his other movie, a Dawn of the Dead remake, you'd note that he pretty much ignored the source material other than that it takes place in a mall.

There are many places where this film can fail, but you've argued none of them in a compelling way, I'm sorry.

Also, I'd take a look at the book Watchmen before making such bold statements.
#7 - Ben Seaver - 07/18/2008 - 17:23
Style is not storytelling
Ben. I disagree with you on the Frank Miller thing. Style has nothing to do with storytelling. I'm not arguing here about the black and white thing and the look. I'm arguing that every shot was lifted straight from the comic book which doesn't benefit a film because the visual film language used to tell a visual story is different in a comic book than in a film.

In copying straight from Sin City, its director did not innovate on what makes a film unique. Sin City was but an animated clone of a comic book and that is not original nor groundbreaking film making.

Snyder did almost the same in 300 and that's why I think it was bad and worry he will do the same with Watchmen.

The noirish look has nothing to do with what I was arguing and there was no need to completely ape the Sin City and 300 comic books in order to make the "look" work.
#8 - Hervé St-Louis - 07/18/2008 - 17:55
Too late!
Inappropriate remarks removed.

-The Editor-
#9 - Roger - 07/18/2008 - 23:30
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#10 - Hervé St-Louis - 07/19/2008 - 00:43
it's interesting that...
when your first complaint is proven to be completely unfounded, you replace it with a completely different complaint that apparently wasn't enough of a concern to make it into the first article.

I seems like you're looking for any possible reason to write something negative about this film. As if you've made up your mind regardless...and are scratching around for things to back up that preconceived notion.

Just seems a little early for that to me.
#11 - brian - 07/19/2008 - 13:47
Not so
Actually, my complaint about the storytelling and the comic book cloning was in the first version of the article. I did expend on that now in this version. Because some of the commentators wrote that I was discussing style, which has nothing to do with my arguments.

And if you read closely, you'll notice that I'm not against the Watchmen movie. Also, I haven't made up my mind about the movie, as I have not seen it. But I do have the right, to express some concerns, and I did.

If I follow your logic, one could also blame anyone who really is excited and positive about the Watchmen movie of having positive preconceived notions...

Why is one superior to the other? Seems to me like it has become a taboo already to say anything that is not 100% supportive of The Watchmen movie.

That's kind of totalitarian thinking...
#12 - Hervé St-Louis - 07/19/2008 - 15:24
I'm still hopeful
I think you have some very important things to say about the differences between comics and film and I think that it's really good that you said them because a lot of people don't seem to get it. Nice work. I don't really think they are the main reasons to be concerned about the Watchmen movie, though. 300 wasn't just a straight comic to film translation. A ton of shots paid homage to the original source but just as many had nothing to do with the book. I think it shows that Snyder understands how to take inspiration from the material but make a film as a film not just a moving comic book. All the same, I still thought the end product of the movie 300 kind of sucked. The slow motion scenes where pretty cheesy. And the scenes added on to the story didn't do much for me. I have hope for the Watchmen movie because

a) Snyder will be to busy trying to get the story down to a manageble run time to indulge in any extra stuff. And the more slow mo, the longer the movie. Sorry Zack.

b) The cast and crew seem just as passionate about making a quality film out of this and staying true to the essence of the story as the director is. We all know what amazing source material they have to work with.

c) Even if it only lives up to half of its potential, it will still be ten times more interesting than most of the crap that passes for entertainment these days anyway.
#13 - Ffej - 07/19/2008 - 18:35
i don't mean to sound overly positive...
i definitely have my own reservations as to how well a book that length, with such a deep level of detail and connection between all the events and characters will translate to what's reportedly going to be a roughly 3 hour movie. But basing things on the one trailer that's been released, it at least looks to be off to a good start in terms of look/visuals. And really, two minutes of visuals are all there is to judge at this point. I'll reserve judgement on story, etc., for when I see it.
#14 - brian - 07/19/2008 - 21:29

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