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Who Watches the Pretentious?

By Geoff Hoppe
Mar 6, 2009 - 10:21

I come to bury Watchmen, not to praise it.

No, seriously. I didn’t like Watchmen.

This makes me something of a pariah in the comic book world. Watchmen is regarded (not unfairly) as the pinnacle of the sequential art medium: rich with reference to superhero tradition, gripping characters, and a narrative with the inescapable momentum of myth, Watchmen is a work of such pressing immediacy that, like Impressionist paintings or great jazz, it engages both expert and novice, self-styled subversives and “banal” bourgeois. Time magazine named it one of the 100 best novels since 1923 (condescendingly referring to Watchmen’s “ambitions above its station”). That popular approval multiplies exponentially among comic book fans. Watchmen is that rare comic you don’t have to be embarrassed about liking. Saying “I don’t like Watchmen” in the middle of a comic book store is a bit like reading Hemingway in the middle of a NOW meeting: it’s not guaranteed you’ll suffer physical harm, but it’s a wise idea to have your will made out ahead of time, just in case. The suicidal loyalty it commands makes trekkies seem tame by comparison. Which is kind of odd, given that Moore seems to view his fans as little more than cat piss.

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Here’s Moore, talking about the Watchmen character Rorschach and, incidentally, some of his most devoted fans: “But actually, to a lot of comic fans…smelly, not having a girlfriend…he’s actually kind of heroic…I have people come up to me on the street and say, ‘I am Rorschach. That is my story.’ And I’m thinking, yeah, great, like, can you just keep away from me. Never come anywhere near me again as long as I live.” In common parlance, this is what is referred to as a “jackass.” Most often, openly voiced sentiments of the “jackass” variety are spoken by adolescent examples of the “jackass” genus. In rare, extreme cases like the aforesaid, said undesirable symptoms last well into adulthood. They can be treated with regular medication, therapy, and tube socks full of quarters. What’s really bad is that I don’t think a lot of fans know Moore feels this way. They have a right to know.

If this is the case, why is Watchmen so popular? The question is, of course, rhetorical, because Watchmen is superb technique-wise. It’s funny, exciting, emotional, meticulously well-paced, multi-layered and somehow maintains all these qualities over the course of a lengthy narrative. I could illustrate a lot of instances from Watchmen, single scenes even, that outdo the total output of a lot of other comic book writers (or novelists, or tv writers, or…). But appreciation’s been done. There have been plenty of online reviews of Watchmen, and the release of the movie today will make for many more. The predictable tsunami of mainstream criticism gurgles and starts to rise. The Financial Times even published an embarrassingly hagiographic piece on Watchmen way back on February 7th, gushing over the book’s “soar of thought and reach of eschatological feeling.” No doubt other uncritical praise jockeys have already, and will continue, to appear in the coming weeks.

There are no more reviews to be written, thank God. This, then? This is not a review. This is reappraisal, complaint, criticism. This is not a review, in the ordinary sense of the word. This is an attempted revaluation of a book and a writer. The ability to appreciate a book’s strengths shouldn’t blind the reader from its weaknesses. And, Moore’s jackassery aside, there are crippling weaknesses in Watchmen people rarely acknowledge.

Somehow, it doesn't scream "realism."
Watchmen is most often praised for its realism. But how realistic is it? Let’s look at the main characters: a psychopathic prostitute’s son, the overworked child of a horny has-been, an emotionless Olympic gymnast with a genius IQ, an impotent amateur ornithologist, a sadistic-yet-plucky nihilist prone to rape, and a rocket scientist made of sticky neutrinos. In what world are those characters realistic? Watchmen isn’t reality, it’s a Monty Python skit without the weird animated segues. If Watchmen is reality, Disney is an earnest and naive small business.

Still, there are some realistic things about Watchmen. In the story, like in real life, crime is ugly, criminals are simply real people pushed into awful situations, and nothing is solved in thirty-two pages. Heroes and villains don’t always have witty retorts. They snivel, cry, or take refuge in violence, that “last refuge of the incompetent.”* Like in real life, good and evil are ambiguous. The good guys don’t always understand what they’re doing, or why they’re doing it--the “costumed adventurers” of Watchmen are less “Charge of the Light Brigade” than “ignorant armies clash(ing) by night,” a la Matthew Arnold’s “Dover Beach.” But if Moore’s story is full of moral ambiguity, it’s filled with twice as much accusation.

Bring out the hell, man, and bring out the best.
Rorschach breaks innocent people’s fingers, Dr. Manhattan kills without a shred of emotion, and the Comedian murders his pregnant Vietnamese lover. The Comedian also tries to rape a super heroine, and the fellow superhero who comes to her rescue is-- surprise surprise--only in the superhero business because he gets his jollies from wearing a mask. Likewise, Dan Dreiberg, the second Nite-Owl, only “gets his groove back” after strapping on the old nylons and rescuing a group of people. These characterizations lack the legitimate ambiguity of great novels. The Razor’s Edge and Madame Bovary, for instance, both condemn certain of their characters, but observe more often than screech. They focus more on life’s aleatory nature than polemics. Contrastingly, impotent heroes and psychopath crime fighters aren’t characterizations-- they’re calculated stabs at the genre of superhero comics, and arguably, at the idea of heroism altogether. True ambiguity on Moore’s part would entail a greater recognition that decent people, while rare, do exist.

Crap, if you don't want the thin mints, just SAY so...
People who are more-or-less good may be extremely rare, in fact, but they do exist. Still, we readily accept Moore’s characters, who implicitly mock our love for the superhero genre, but we can’t accept good natured farm boy reporters (who do exist) or skinny fine arts students with serious crushes on America’s ideals (who I’m sure exist somewhere…) Moore certainly can’t. His opinion of the superhero genre’s foundation is pretty low: “we can’t believe in these super boy scouts anymore. We don’t know anyone in real life who behaves like that, and readers don’t believe in them, so we’ve just tried to make them a little more like real twentieth-century human beings.” So much for those relics Bob Kane, Bill Finger, Jerry Siegel, Joe Schuster, Stan Lee, Steve Ditko, Jack Kirby, Joe Simon, and countless others. I heartily commend the daring and vision with which Moore sweeps away the preceding decades of apparently worthless sequential art innovation, but I’m afraid my paltry mind can’t keep up with his progressive vigor.

If people really felt the way Moore describes, comics wouldn’t exist as they do now. Titles like Garth Ennis’ The Boys (or the comic about pirates that a side character reads in Watchmen) would be the majority, rather than the exception. But they are the exception, and most people don’t buy them. People still get excited about good guys and bad guys. Sure, these stories have become increasingly ambiguous in the past several decades-- but they’re all still, at their heart, good-vs.-evil stories. Last year, the most consistently sold-out story arc at my local comic shop was “New Ways to Die” in Amazing Spider-Man, a story that paired-- guess who-- a notorious villain and a virtuous hero for the first time in awhile. Not to mention the fact that the biggest box office success of 2008 was a good-vs.-evil comic book movie. Meanwhile, Wanted, another comic book movie, did less well-- and even then, only after writers butchered and rewrote the film until it barely resembled the nihilistic, anti-heroic comic that inspired it.

Don't know who made this. But it rocks.
Who said utter pessimism is realistic? Reality, in this reviewer’s experience, is most often neutral and mundane. It tends towards the negative-- but, sooner or later, the negatives are nullified by the routine of daily life. A truly “realistic” story, in the purest sense of the word, would feature bill-paying, toilet cleaning, grocery shopping and the occasional spats with your loved ones (THIS MONTH IN GREEN LANTERN-- THRILL AS HAL JORDAN WAITS FORTY MINUTES ON THE PHONE FOR A CLAIMS ADJUSTOR!). The mistaken belief that Watchmen is realistic often dovetails onto the belief that it’s also profound art.

Whenever I read a gut-wrenching story, a voice in me says “that’s so realistic! How true to life!” That voice-- the one that equates despair with reality and brilliance--I used to mistake for my critical, rational faculty. It isn’t. It’s the opposite side of the same coin that believes, say, that unicorns are real, subsist on jelly beans, and crap rainbows. Cynicism isn’t reality. It’s the coward’s variant of stupid, unthinking optimism. Maturity resides in avoiding histrionics of either sort and soldiering through life-- in other words, it’s a lot more like Spider-Man or The Incredibles than Watchmen. If hopelessness and depression are proofs of brilliant tragedy, then Nicholas Sparks is Shakespeare and disease-of-the-week movies on Lifetime deserve Emmys. Watchmen shouldn’t be mistaken for a tragedy. True tragedy has peace at the eye of its storm, some substantial core. It was Arthur Miller who denied the idea that “tragedy is of necessity allied to pessimism…pathos truly is the mode for the pessimist. But tragedy requires a nicer balance between what is possible and what is impossible.”

How does Melinda Gebbie resist him.
We learn from Oedipus’ mistakes. Lear’s outcries and assertions, though futile, provide a rebellious buttress against the calamitous uncertainty of life. Even though John Proctor dies at the end of Miller’s own The Crucible, his wife Elizabeth’s final line: “He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!” leaves the viewer with a conviction of stoic serenity, rather than hopelessness. Watchmen doesn’t have that core. It’s an inverse Frankenstein’s monster: polished and sophisticated on the outside, no soul inside. It’s written by a man who sneers at his most devoted fans. And it’s time, most of all, for fans to reject the critical status quo and expect better.

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*Thanks to Salvor Hardin, and, of course, Isaac Asimov.


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