Koni Waves #1

Koni Waves is about a young woman named Koni Kanawai. Koni is a cute Hawaiian girl who always seems to end up in bad situations.

As I started reading through this comic book I realized it was targeted for a male audience due to the mass amount of sex appeal in it. I also felt that this black and white comic should be in color, perhaps that would draw in more people to read this book.

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The story starts off with a brief introduction about our main heroine so to speak. She basically gets sexually harassed and almost assaulted in the first 8 pages. Then she is drugged and captured by a perverted drunken rich guy who plans to sacrifice her to his apparent deity “Puea”. Puea is a wooden totem creature that stands about 8 feet tall. He’s hungry for some Hawaiian meat so he and his thugs run after Koni only to get their butt’s kicked by her as she continues running from them. It's kind of funny to see the action, very entertaining.

This comic is part comedy and part action. I found it very entertaining and if Mark Pulton throws good male lead that would draw in some female fans. I look forward to reading another one!

 
Art – 6 of 10 - Could use some more details on the backgrounds. Color please?

Story – 7 of 10 - Very fun to read! Good!

Layout – 5 of 10 - Some scenes were a bit jumpy and low in details.

 
Overall - 6 of 10 - Could use minor improvements but definitely worth the read!

 
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